Welcum to the Loo's Refsheet Abode!!
LazyBEW.
Tis la LOO,
Yup. I'm bringing this account BACK FROM THE DEAD cB
This such action has been incited by a need to stash all of my character sheets and refpages somewhere, for easy access by the general audience, and an escape from the unsightly clutter refpages can cause in a formal gallery.
So yeah. When I get my refsheets done, here they'll go {3 I suggest you watch this account if you want to directly get character newz, and refsheets galore!
Including those of the ELUSIVE FREAK JUHOLYNZA.
D8
I know there are like twelve hundred people who need that refsheet...
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If you have arrived here randomly, then I suggest you go to my rl account for the goods ^_^ =Luna-v
AN THO I HAVE NOT RFSHTS YET I SHLL SOON. SO YEAH.
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But what about SONGRUN?
--Well, this account was formerly used for my novel, Songrun xD but I stopped posting. There were like two people who were interested at all in reading it, so if you've read the 'beginning', and wanna see what goes next, I MIGHT be able to supply you with a little storystuff :[
BEWARE. The novel has been modifed and edited so much in some places it's unregonizable xD so...
Yup.
Enjoi n00bz.
Looness
*mew*
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Don't you just love evil things?
...I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream...
I luvs you.
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One of these days I'll have a fan girl.
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Insane? Probably.
Goof? Definitely.
Why do the foals need to learn to sing? What is singing’s significance to the herd? Is it about storytelling or religion, perhaps homage to equine gods? Or so that each herd member can have oral history drilled into them?
Why would horses sing about the beauty of a wolf’s call? Wouldn’t the cry of a predator that kills their young, sick, and very old make them shiver? Just that one line bothered me a bit. Especially since the later on the wolves attack and the horses respond with bewildered terror.
If Rose is mute, how can she form words? I just think that needed a little explanation: it could be that she is only moved to speak when a song stirs in her heart. Unless she is genuinely physically mute, and in which she would probably keen wordlessly (but no less beautifully.)
I’d like to know a little bit more background on the horse’s social structure. Who is the herd leader? Why is he respected? What emphasis to horses place on fidelity? Who is Rose’s father? Does he not see her as a foal because she’s not worth his time to acknowledge until she is of age?
Why does Roc the Raven feel the need to “choose a side”? The wolves don’t appear to be attacking the horses out of evil intentions. They just need/want to eat. If Roc was talking about the “nameless enemy”, it wasn’t made very clear.
I actually have a race of sentient horses in a novel series of mine, called the Eqkin, and a lot of what I used to create them I saw in your horses here.
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“Indeed, current events may become past events, but always remember that there will, now and always, be future events in the future.” --Captain Obvious
Well, as for Pegasus...to make sure I get it written down right, I'm scribbling a comic like thing, something like a story line. It's all I have for now
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“Indeed, current events may become past events, but always remember that there will, now and always, be future events in the future.” --Captain Obvious
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“Indeed, current events may become past events, but always remember that there will, now and always, be future events in the future.” --Captain Obvious
2.) The singing was just an activity, to better practice vocally once they talked. A little fun.
3.) That!....is an excellent point. Sorry, when I was trying to rhyme up things I guess I kinda forgot it was horses I was writing for.
4.) That is one wierdo second-grade idea. Wierd. Why she is wierd. I dunno, just that it had something to do with her feelings. You explained it beautifully.
5.) The stallion is Monsoon. I probably forgot to mention he was the stallion, but, well, he was treated like it, and he was the only guy... He fathered most the foals, but, well, he couldn't have that many by himself
6.) Roc understands thier intentions, thanks to his intellect. But which is the better intention? That is what his choice is. He sees the wolves harming the horses to feed themselves and thier children, and the horses fight and harm them to saves themselves and thier childen, and...well, obviously he is torn, because he can't decide which one the more good would come out of. Not to side with them physically, more emotionally, knowing what they do is for good. Which, thus, means the other idea isn't...
Thanks for it all anyway! That's why I asked for such critics. The whole story is so big, I can't keep track of the stuff the people would like fixed. So I asked the people.
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